OBITUARIES (Will Close Until FALL 2017)

Yay, thank you so much for the scores and for the feedback. I am so excited to be working with Jen!

@Jendowoz what is the best way to reach you to get started?

Checking in. I wish I hadn't rushed. I think I spent more time on getting it to look like actual paper than checking for typos unfortunately. Probably would have help to read some more examples of obits too.

Paint.net needs spell check too. I hate typing without it. Ok enough whinning!

Well maybe a little more whining. Water? I was hoping the first death wouldn't be water. That's a hard one. I'm up for the challenge tho. Let's do this!

Yay @InaMac69 being my mentor. I need all the help I can get.

@Vidkid20 sent you a pm sweetie

WOOOOO

@socallucyfan and @Vidkid20 Thanks for checking in you two!

socal, You're welcome! Vid, you made me laugh so much! Can't wait to see what everyone does this round!

Hi @socallucyfan

You can contact me via PM here, or at Simtech or the US forum or you can email me on jendowoz55@gmail.com. So glad to be working with you.
You did well in the mock with Madison, she's really pretty. Good luck for the next round.

@InaMac69 Pm'd you. Sorry I'm just getting online. Pesky sweet family. lol

@ArtsyAmy


I need to add more smilies.

Updated with check ins: lionpaws and Grimm_Pandemic

lionpaws, I'm so excited to be your Mentor!!! Anything you need just pm me!

Is it still too late to enter? Ive been wanting to jump in, but since I'm a new mommy, havent been able to get back into it. S&M is in my bones!

Edit: oh nvm, looks.like it's started already... tryna view forum on mobile is a pain lol. I look forward to seeing some bad ass entries though!

@JaLiBo Actually you can still enter if you are able to get your entry in for Assignment 1 by the due date! You will need to do the Mock Assignment too, but just wouldn't get any scores for it. This is okay because the scores actually start for this 1st round.

Please let me know asap so I can add you to the model list and you'll need a full body shot on any color solid bkgd so I can add your model to the wall.

Lol, dang. So I gotta pop out 2 assignments. I'll see if I can get it cracked out!

EDIT: @ArtsyAmy495.... I didn't read the rules clearly apparently. This comp requires writing... and I am not the best @ writing out my ideas. I'm more of just a visual S&M'er. I think I may have to retract my reserve for this comp. I was loving the idea of this comp though.

JaLiBo wrote:

Lol, dang. So I gotta pop out 2 assignments. I'll see if I can get it cracked out!

EDIT: @ArtsyAmy495.... I didn't read the rules clearly apparently. This comp requires writing... and I am not the best @ writing out my ideas. I'm more of just a visual S&M'er. I think I may have to retract my reserve for this comp. I was loving the idea of this comp though.

Okay hun, I sent you a pm, so I didn't know about your edit here when I did! Hopefully you'll lurk! Yes, this comp is to help improve where you need to. If writing isn't a strength the best way to get better is practice. Just join some comps and try it out....you may find out you love writing with your pics! *All pics tell a story, you're just letting everyone know what it is.

@JaliBo Dang it! I was hoping you would join!



Welllll I'm almost done!!!! I'm editing now!

@Vidkid20 >_< I'm sorry! I really did want to! But its enough tryna take screenshots and edit my photos with a baby.  Then I have to wreck my brain to explain my photo too. Lol

@JaliBo I can imagine. I'm having a hard time explaining my photo and I have distractions. Me and my lazy brain.

Blah I hate being first. I guess I can't fudge up 3....er 5 sentences, but man writing those  sentences was hard. xD

Ugh let me know if you want me to shorten the caption. I don't want points taken off for going over 3 or 2 sentences.

Also click full size please. It's so much better that way.

You did this really well, @vidkid20

Vidkid20 wrote:

Ugh let me know if you want me to shorten the caption. I don't want points taken off for going over 3 or 2 sentences.

Also click full size please. It's so much better that way.

First off, I love your entry & yes, you are limited to 3 sentences. I will allow you to change it since you are the first one in....this once. You can ask your Mentor before posting in the future rounds....Yes you will get deducts for extra sentences, so I wouldn't want you to lose any either!!! I would suggest combining some, but you can get more specific with your Mentor. (I started to post this entry but will wait for your new one) + if anyone else submits their first entry with too many sentences I will allow them to revise the writing as well. To be fair.

Great job!

**EDIT*** I did post your pic but struck the writing

Updated with your new wording @Vidkid20! YAYYY!!! Down to 3 sentences!

@ArtsyAmy495 LOL Thank you for letting me edit. I'm a bit wordy sometimes. I should have asked you or Ina before posting. Sorry about that.

Vidkid20 wrote:

@ArtsyAmy495 LOL Thank you for letting me edit. I'm a bit wordy sometimes. I should have asked you or Ina before posting. Sorry about that.

No problem! Yeah, I've always been wordy & have mastered being able to say as much as possible with the LEAST amount of words!!! LOL

i am just stuck. i have been racking my brain, and just cant seem to come up with ANYTHING do-able. i have lots of ideas, but nothing that can be done without making poses and such, i just dont have time for that. i might be able to throw something together, but i worry at the lack of creativity of the throwing together idea.... >.<

Thanks Amy for your support